Now is time to see my improvement into two years so I have to put my first composition of forth of ESO, it was about cats and I think it have almost one hundred or one hundred and twenty words, while I'm writting more than two hundred and fifty words when I'm speaking about something I like to.
Here is my first post!
I can't believe everything had changed that much, my point of view, my life, my free time and as you can see my english level!
Here you can see my best work!
I did this post after see Pearl Harbor and I tried to inspire me with the film. I'n my opinion it worked because I like the result I had. Here, as you can see my english level increased a lot since 2012.
OhMyGod I knew my pronunciation was bad, but I didn't believe it could be that bad, I mean I spoke like I was a fool and the worst part is that I though I did it great..
You can see my "awesome" pronunciation here
Two years later, I know my pronunciation is not the best one but I improved it a lot, I can understand e
English people while they're speaking, it's not easy because they speak so fast but I understand almost everything, but my pronunciation... mhh... It should be better and I know it. Here you can see my last podcast ( It was the last one I've done, but there are more of them with the last posts).
Well, now that you can check my old and new posts, it's time to comment it.
First of all I have to say that they're only one thing in common and it's that I've done it both on my own, but the rest are totally different. The most visible change is the number of words I used in the first post and the number of words I'm using right now. I can manage a composition with three or four hundred and do it better than okay. The structure of my posts also has changed because now it has sense and you understand what I want to say, while when I was in forth of ESO I wanted to say many things but no one understood what I was speaking about because I didn't know how to structure my ideas and sentences.
As we hear in the podcast, when I was fifteen years old I had a different voice, I sounded like a little scared girl and I was so embarrassed when I had to speak in English in front of the class, but now I don't care what people say.
Giving linguistic arguments, when I was fifteen I didn't even know what was a discussion essay, an opinion essay, a formal letter.. I just wrote what I wanted. I didn't know many connectors so I always used the same ones, and my vocabulary was poor, repetitive, and if it was not enough, I used it as bad as it was possible. I though it was great, but I didn't know that connectors as "moreover, however or furthermore" existed.
As I said before, I just wrote what I though it was interesting to be written, I didn't do introductions or explanations or divide ideas into paragraphs.
What I have to say in my defense is that I was more mature than other same age girls, when I was inspired I spoke about interesting things and I tried to do it easy to read and I think I wrote that posts because I just needed to get that feelings out of my system.
My grammar was the poorest thing, I didn't know many verb tenses, I just used present and past simple because it was what I knew. My structures were the simplest and I used always the same one. I don't want to check my mistakes because I'm afraid of what I will find there, maybe past should stay there, in the past.
My vocabulary, well my posts had one hundred words more or less but they are always the same ones, I had no variety and I didn't know synonyms of that words.
I can see a BIG PERSONAL DEVELOPMENT, I mean I grow up doing this blog and I posted my feelings and my problems here, maybe they were silly problems and maybe I shouldn't have written what I have written about, but now it's done. Now I feel more mature and more comprehensive that I used to be, life change everyone!
Here is my first post!
I can't believe everything had changed that much, my point of view, my life, my free time and as you can see my english level!
Here you can see my best work!
I did this post after see Pearl Harbor and I tried to inspire me with the film. I'n my opinion it worked because I like the result I had. Here, as you can see my english level increased a lot since 2012.
OhMyGod I knew my pronunciation was bad, but I didn't believe it could be that bad, I mean I spoke like I was a fool and the worst part is that I though I did it great..
You can see my "awesome" pronunciation here
English people while they're speaking, it's not easy because they speak so fast but I understand almost everything, but my pronunciation... mhh... It should be better and I know it. Here you can see my last podcast ( It was the last one I've done, but there are more of them with the last posts).
Well, now that you can check my old and new posts, it's time to comment it.
First of all I have to say that they're only one thing in common and it's that I've done it both on my own, but the rest are totally different. The most visible change is the number of words I used in the first post and the number of words I'm using right now. I can manage a composition with three or four hundred and do it better than okay. The structure of my posts also has changed because now it has sense and you understand what I want to say, while when I was in forth of ESO I wanted to say many things but no one understood what I was speaking about because I didn't know how to structure my ideas and sentences.
As we hear in the podcast, when I was fifteen years old I had a different voice, I sounded like a little scared girl and I was so embarrassed when I had to speak in English in front of the class, but now I don't care what people say.
Giving linguistic arguments, when I was fifteen I didn't even know what was a discussion essay, an opinion essay, a formal letter.. I just wrote what I wanted. I didn't know many connectors so I always used the same ones, and my vocabulary was poor, repetitive, and if it was not enough, I used it as bad as it was possible. I though it was great, but I didn't know that connectors as "moreover, however or furthermore" existed.
As I said before, I just wrote what I though it was interesting to be written, I didn't do introductions or explanations or divide ideas into paragraphs.
My grammar was the poorest thing, I didn't know many verb tenses, I just used present and past simple because it was what I knew. My structures were the simplest and I used always the same one. I don't want to check my mistakes because I'm afraid of what I will find there, maybe past should stay there, in the past.
My vocabulary, well my posts had one hundred words more or less but they are always the same ones, I had no variety and I didn't know synonyms of that words.
I can see a BIG PERSONAL DEVELOPMENT, I mean I grow up doing this blog and I posted my feelings and my problems here, maybe they were silly problems and maybe I shouldn't have written what I have written about, but now it's done. Now I feel more mature and more comprehensive that I used to be, life change everyone!
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